Fahru van Lanfard
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Fahru van Lanfard
brenden96 Wed Apr 13, 2011 1:34 pm
Character's name: Fahru Van Lanfard
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Epithet: "Carnivore"
Faction: Pirate
Reputation: 139,000,000 belli
Profession: Captain
Crew/Flag: Fossil Pirate
(No need to get a pic)
Appearance: He look really ambitious about 179 cm with Golden eyes, always appear in hoody jacket with his pirates flag in the back of his jacket, and in the bottom of the flag there is his epithet wrote there "CARNIVORE" and his hair is silver.
Origin : West Blue
Personality: Fahru is really ambitious, he even fool people for his goal, but not for his friend. his best quote "look on my teeth!? each teeth kill at least 12 people! for my friend's SAKE!" he kinda nice for people he know (not counting enemy) but, he still attack citizen for some reason. Even tough he become a pirates is an accident he still "enjoy" as a pirates.
History
Weapon : A Black Blade, Hyper Ball (only 30 minutes use)
items : a ring, it look expensive
Special thing :
Weapon Mastery : Blade
Rokushiki (Note only Soru,Gepou and Sigan)
Ancient Zoan Devil Fruit : Godai Godai no Mi Model : Spinosaurus (Godai : Ancient)
Mecha Mecha no Mi
Devil Fruit :
Godai Godai no Mi Model : Spinosaurus (Godai : Ancient)
Type : Zoan
Sub Type : Ancient Zoan
Description as an Ancient Zoan devil fruit, his most great asset his big body, because hes gigantic body he can create a big wave, his teeth is so strong and he can run fast (230 Kilo/Hour).Another great asset is his skin, because dinosaur have strong and big skin, making him cant be hurted by blade or gun, even an Logia type devil fruit (not all XD). Also The Spin in his body can become an ultimate blade.
Mecha Mecha No Mi
Type : Paramecia
as a mecha human he can control steel into an armour or robot,because using Hyper Ball (we call this Pseudo Devil Fruit), he can only use this power in 3 minutes, other then he receive great effect or dead.
Signature Moves :
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Epithet: "Carnivore"
Faction: Pirate
Reputation: 139,000,000 belli
Profession: Captain
Crew/Flag: Fossil Pirate
(No need to get a pic)
Appearance: He look really ambitious about 179 cm with Golden eyes, always appear in hoody jacket with his pirates flag in the back of his jacket, and in the bottom of the flag there is his epithet wrote there "CARNIVORE" and his hair is silver.
Origin : West Blue
Personality: Fahru is really ambitious, he even fool people for his goal, but not for his friend. his best quote "look on my teeth!? each teeth kill at least 12 people! for my friend's SAKE!" he kinda nice for people he know (not counting enemy) but, he still attack citizen for some reason. Even tough he become a pirates is an accident he still "enjoy" as a pirates.
History
- Spoiler:
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Part 1, Become a pirates
Fahru born as an prince in a kingdom called PH Kingdom (PHK), as a noble hi kinda proudful. but, he not enjoy his life as a "boring" noble. one day Fahru run from his house, his father's wrath send the forces for searching his missing son. To make sure his son will return to the kingdom, he rent a Comorade (VA). VA finally found Fahru and ask him to home, but Fahru refuse, and he beat VA and he say " I more like Pirate then you World Goverment!" VA hearing something like that , request to marineford giving bounty 35.000.000 berry for defeating an Comorade easily.
Part 2, Return to the PHK
As Fahru need money and power he gather his friend in PHK to become a pirates, as his goal is the "Pirates King mk.II treasure". he attack his own kingdom and the result being defeated by more then 9000 army. But is one of the Fahru's brilliant plan, as he know the his father's money is near the jail, he and his friend jailbreak and stealing in total 480.000.000 berry.
And then killing all the 9000 army with super smart plan, without killing his family.
Part 3, Entering the Grand Line
Fahru now enter the Red Line and arrive in reverse mountain, he choose the 3rd path of Grand Line because it is look like a horoscope, Arriving in his first island, again he meet Commorade VA with his new power, devil fruit Supa Supa no Mi (same as Mr.1) and defeat Fahru easily. but Fahru manage to survive and search for power.
Part 4, The Devil Fruit Paradise
Fahru in his total 49 Crew appear in the "Devil Fruit Paradise" a shop that sold many rare and strong devil fruit all his 48 member buying the devil fruit (without trying it), but his not "he say i searching for Logia and nothing here" again he fought VA in the marine ship, he run to the storage room because "Damn! I am the weakest membert of my crew" ,in the storage he found an undefinied devil fruit, forcing him to eat it. then he know is an supreme power "ANCIENT ZOAN ! : Godai Godai no Mi Model : Spinosaurus (Godai : Ancient)
Part 5,The Fake and the Real
Fahru using his new power beaten many marine, but there is still VA and other marine, unluckily all his friend drowned to the sea. but all people suprise "THEY CAN SWIM?!", and then all his friend say "SHIT! that not a devil fruit we ate!?". But not for Fahru! using his power he manage to kill VA , drowned him to the sea (Status unknown)
Part 6, The Lab of King
Fahru and his friend somehow appear in the "Legendary Mates" lab, the smartest "BEAST" in the world. he discovered secret of Hyper Ball, a suplement that enhanced Zoan user power into 7 transformation + eating another Devil Fruit with some effect. But the secret of the Lab active, a Self destruct. thanks to Hyper Ball power the Wing Point, making Fahru manage to escape from the destruction.
Part 7, My Power
Fahru appear in Sabaondy,again ended in war, battle an infamous pirates from new world. Fahru some how being captured by an Sea Stone, forcing him fight in combat. But his original power (aka human power) Soru. manage to escaping him from the sea stone.
Weapon : A Black Blade, Hyper Ball (only 30 minutes use)
items : a ring, it look expensive
Special thing :
Weapon Mastery : Blade
Rokushiki (Note only Soru,Gepou and Sigan)
Ancient Zoan Devil Fruit : Godai Godai no Mi Model : Spinosaurus (Godai : Ancient)
Mecha Mecha no Mi
Devil Fruit :
Godai Godai no Mi Model : Spinosaurus (Godai : Ancient)
Type : Zoan
Sub Type : Ancient Zoan
Description as an Ancient Zoan devil fruit, his most great asset his big body, because hes gigantic body he can create a big wave, his teeth is so strong and he can run fast (230 Kilo/Hour).Another great asset is his skin, because dinosaur have strong and big skin, making him cant be hurted by blade or gun, even an Logia type devil fruit (not all XD). Also The Spin in his body can become an ultimate blade.
Mecha Mecha No Mi
Type : Paramecia
as a mecha human he can control steel into an armour or robot,because using Hyper Ball (we call this Pseudo Devil Fruit), he can only use this power in 3 minutes, other then he receive great effect or dead.
Signature Moves :
- Spoiler:
Normal Point Signature:
Rokushiki :
Shigan
Soru
Geppou
Dino Mode Signature:
DaiBaito Sigan(Grand Bite Sigan) : Fahru enhanced his mouth with Hyper Ball, making a giant teeth + using Sigan with his teeth.
Dashing Dino : Fahru start dashing after biting someone, and then headbutting his head into nearly stone/house.
Spin Kila (Spin Killer) : Fahru using Geppou and then spinning in the air, his spin coated by Sigan
Kyūkyoku no Ha(Ultimate Blade) : Simmiliar Rankyaku Amanedachi, he start spinning, and then make a great wave, his spin coated by Sigan.
Tetsu Gawa (Iron/Dragon Skin) : Enhanced by Hyper Ball his skin change into Iron like. making his skin more great then before. using this giving some hurt effect.
Mecha Mode Signature:
Tune Up! : He will absorb nearby steel/machines and then fuse it into a robot
Mass Product : Clone the robot, but decrease the power of the robot
Z-Mechine : He will absorb nearby steel/machine and then fuse it into an armour
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brenden96 Wed Apr 13, 2011 1:36 pm
Okay, it's a little better, BUT :
1. YOUR HISTORY IS STILL SLOPPY. Cut the "killing VA" out of it.
2. You did NOT kill 9000 marines either! That is too overpowered for starting.
3. You cannot have TWO Devil's Fruits without propper explanation!
1. YOUR HISTORY IS STILL SLOPPY. Cut the "killing VA" out of it.
2. You did NOT kill 9000 marines either! That is too overpowered for starting.
3. You cannot have TWO Devil's Fruits without propper explanation!
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